22A Elevator Pitch No.3
Based on the comments I received, my pitch was definitely more effective after I condensed the cryptocurrency information, so I decided to shorten it just a little more. I also changed the call to action to make more sense with a conversational situation since the mention of the website didn't make much sense. Lastly, I made an effort to be less monotone and more genuine with my speech. Hopefully this helped!
Mitchell,
ReplyDeleteYou really took the feedback and bettered your pitch. You seem much more mature and put together in this pitch than the first one. I really enjoyed the progession. The changes you made was helpful as I felt myself understanding the concept and what you were saying better than before. Great job!